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[TRITEN [10/10/10 WIP]]

voice overs?

its interesting, but either do voice overs or let the text stay a while longer so people can read it. or at least add like a click function to move on the dialog. seems more like an interactive graphic novel, which would be something interesting to see.

omegafinal responds:

The complete version will have voice acting.

[Metal Gill Jawesome]

unimpressed

yea... speaking of taking jokes waaay too far you hit the mark with this one. i mean the jokes weren't at all delievered very well, and im shocked that Egoraptor would even agree to even place his voice, or even his time on the script. at least you were honest about saying it was all your work, it takes balls to put all the blame on yourself. while it essentially sounded the same as MGA this rendition of it was a huge miss, the original was great, so why mess with something that was fine the way it was??? take the time to review the timing of your jokes, and make them more noticeable. For sure next time take it up to various people before deciding to post a funny vid, just so you can make sure you aren't laughing at yourself and your jokes, but that the vid makes people laugh with you. that is the key for comedy gold.

Jonas responds:

As I'm your very first flash review on the site, and you only joined a few days ago, I'm going to take all of your advice to heart, and I'm going to make sure that I show everyone my work multiple times.

Thank goodness an amazing comedy genius such as yourself came along, or I'd be completely lost!

Looking forward to seeing your work soon, since you're obviously miles beyond anything else that has been put on the site!

It was a privilege and honor to be graced with your presence with my meager flash.

Oh wait, it's just like your user page says,

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Looking forward to you showing me what real comedy is. : )